god i would change it to where his brother and father were never revealed i feel like having them be these ominous forces that you only perceive through derek would be 👌👌👌👌👌 (and people would stop praising his whitey brother but what do i know lmao)

i'd also change it to where he's a lot more handsy with mc (AND HAS MORE ENDINGS WITH SEX OR INTIMACY HIS ROUTE PISSES ME OFF) but i know gato writes like colleen hover garbo but for millennials who like spicy rape murder fanfic 🤷‍♀️