Why must your character spam memes in every updated panel? It's getting weird actually, like when we slide to the next picture to read what happens next, it's just your character using the wrong account to scream or being whipped and spamming memes with some keyboard error languages... It's fine if it's only one or two times, but in every panel? Like, what is the important part we should get from your AU? Do you really can write or just just being lazy? When we read the Taehyun and Beomgyu characters, they like the same person and their behavior is just the same especially when they spam memes. The mafia character you wrote didn't really look like mafia...I get that you were trying to write a cute mafia character, but it still doesn't look like mafia to me, more like a general college student.