It... Gets the job done is all I can say, there was missed opportunities to make the chapter really interesting tho, like the whole mini rivalry with Hifumi and Kiyotaka, it would've been so much more beneficial to Celeste if she got those two to fight more, those two could've done all the dirty work to try and kill/hurt the other and she could just sit back and watch, and why did she frame Yasuhiro? Kiyotaka was the perfect person to frame it wouldn't be hard to believe he killed someone in that state. Also the whole Kiyondo thing is more annoying then anything, they set up this interesting narrative with him and he just kinda died before it could go anywhere? there's a scrapped freetime event with Kiyondo so they most likely had another plan for his character, the whole thing feels half baked imo, Celeste just needed to be the ultimate shit starter.