Anonymous Alien · 4mo
Hiii I wanna say that I adore your fics especially your new one! I love your ideas and writing style sooo so much, but I've noticed that you frequently put different speakers in the same paragraph instead of starting a new one with every speaker. And while I'm not trying to be rude at all (I'm really sorry if this is) I think it'd improve readability if you followed that rule, it's just easier to not mix up who is currently speaking when it's separated! Your writing is great, I just wanted to point that out the more I read through your works since I'd have to back up and reread parts to keep track. If this is out of line I understand if you ignore it! Also I can't wait for the next chapter of fine print :)
Please don't worry about coming of rude! I don't perceive it that way at all <3 Thank you for pointing it out. Quite honestly, I wasn't even aware of that rule hahaha, which after a quick google search I should have been. I think it's one of those things that I have missed because English isn't my native language, and that rule doesn't really exist in my language (or if it does, there is less focus on it) But like I said, I definitely understand, and I'll try to keep in mind as I write. I'm always happy to try and improve, and also try out new things. When I have time I'll go back and edit chapter 2 a bit, but I probably won't do that to all the other stories that I've posted - Surely I made that same mistake in those! 😅
I'm happy to have you along for the ride, and chapter 3 is definitely in the works hehehe
