your art would be so much better if the lines werent so rough .. consider changing brushes or softening the pressure, i dont think you need to draw every single expression line or put so much details in their skin, it looks overwhelming and ruins the piece. also please train anatomy, these positions, the hands, the proportions hurt to look. you have a lot of potential and im only saying this because i want to see you improve and make good art, dont take it as an offense