so i was waiting until the weekend to comment on it so i could read it properly (i looked through it during my lunch break OTL), but i did read both chapters and i really love them!! the way you’ve integrated the siblings and arle into the adeptus reality is really cool, they already give off a mysterious aura in canon but in this AU you really made that pop off (even though they’re the protagonists, so technically we know more about them than the rest of the world)! and just, overall their relationship with arle is so cute here, from them asking them to go to liyue harbor & hugging them, to buying them presents… and also, the fact that pers was made by cloud retainer is so cute 😭 i also really like how you write descriptions, i’ll leave a comment on the fic pointing out my favourite parts when i sit down to read it with 100% of my attention 🫡 thank you so much for sharing, i was craving this AU and you’re doing it so much justice!!! can’t wait to see what part furina will play in all this hehe!!