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Anonymous Coward · 8mo

I think you should try to expand your fics and add more details and dialogues cuz I feel like the ynbn fic is soo short and everything is happening too fast
You're a good writer you have the potential please work harder on this point and I promise your fics will be the prettiest

Omg! I didn’t see this soon! Thank you for telling me, I’ll use this as a guide to improve my writing skills, thank you for telling me, I hope I don’t disappoint you for future fic stories soon!

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