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hihi~ just asking smth since it bothers me a bit w your witch bin fic, why are they using korean honorifics in such weird way? meaning hao called out hanbin-ah almost as soon as they met, bin using -ya/ah with woong nd neul but then using hyung the next second. so i dont rly know if you know how to use them or if its intentional, and if its intentional then id like to know why^^ its an interesting story nd youre getting better w storytelling♡
hi!! i want to first thank you for your kind words and say that i’m happy you’re enjoying the story!~ secondly, i am aware of how korean honorifics work. let me try to clear things up.
hao didn’t use ‘hanbin-ah’ with hanbin when they first met, it was after the fourth time they met. there was never any sort of line in the fic that proclaimed when they should start talking casually to one another, it’s just sort of implied that after meeting so many times they would do that. there fourth meeting was when hanbin showed up to the station unannounced and hao was flustered because he was emotional. the talk that they had was the signifier that they were getting closer. looking back on it though, maybe i do agree that it shouldn’t be until they start getting more close (middle of chapter 2), so i did go back and fix that, so thank you!~
as for hanbin calling jiwoong ‘jiwoong-hyung’: he did so throughout the entirety of the fic. keep in mind that they’re best friends and they can very well speak more casually, but i had hanbin always call him jiwoong-hyung because it felt right. there was only one time that hanbin called him ‘jiwoong-ah’ and it was because he was calling out to him in his office.
chapter 3 was the first time hanbin calls hao ‘hao-yah’, but like i said before, they are close at this point! you hadn’t commented about this, but i want to make it clear that that’s also why hanbin uses ‘-ah/ya’ with his witch friends (and they call him the same), because they are all close.
Thoughts on bot bin? 😞
i am a lot more neulbin leaning, but i believe they are switches! i enjoy writing nb so much more though, and when it comes to reading i enjoy nb more. but i don’t specifically seek out top/member bottom/member when i’m reading, and i don’t even really like to tag my fics as such bc i believe there’s no set way with them, ya know?~
also ps i thought this meant ‘robot bin’ and had a good laugh about that until i realized haha
only actually saw ur fic from ur twt but saw that it was backdated... just worried jt wont receive the traction it deserves because its publish date is a week ago so it wont show up on recent fics :/
hiii i really likes your “incentives” fic and i’m a linguistic student and i was wondering if it was okay to translate your fic as practice 🥹 i don’t intend on publishing it anywhere yet, but if you’re okay with me translating and later publishing the result i will definitely credit and tag your original work!
Hii!! Thank you for always being amazing and bringing some good energy to my tl <3 I hope your day goes great!
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