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hiii you’re writing is absolutely beautiful and captivating! Do you want any tips for a beginner writer??
thank you so much! that's a good question. here are a couple pointers i like to give out to people who are just beginning to write:
don't be intimidated by a blank page. all it is is a canvas for you to begin your craft. sometimes, we sit and stare at a blank page and wonder what the best way to start is and how to create the perfect hook, but just start writing. if you have an idea for dialogue but you don't have the beginning worked out yet, that's okay! start by writing down the dialogue. the point is to take whatever is in your mind and put it on paper.
what you make at first may not satisfy your expectations, but that's okay. as long as you can get the words out, then you did more than enough for the day. you can worry about sentence structure, grammar, and all the technicalities later, but for the beginning, just work on getting the words down. we can never truly recreate what we are thinking in our heads, but that's fine. that's the entire writing process for you -- we plan for one thing, but then another thing happens. let it guide you!
don't be afraid to delete entire paragraphs or whole scenes. if it needs to be reworked, then it needs to be reworked. i recommend taking scenes you don't particularly like and placing it in a new doc, and then deleting it from the original and starting it over. now, you have a whole page for outtakes that you can then pull from in the future for a new fic. think of it as a way to recycle your writing! but the scene you just deleted might have just made space for something even better. point is, it's okay to completely scrap something and redo it. it's all part of the creative process.
don't be too rigid. it's good to plan, it's even better to make an outline, but if something changes, allow it to. the story will tell you how it wants to be written if you listen to it. i can't tell you how many times i tried to sit down and plan for a fic and then end up going completely rogue. i'll listen to it for the beginning, but then as scenes progress, i end up taking it in a completely different direction. this is actually how my fraternity fic was born! be fluid with your words and allow it to tell you where it wants to go. if, for example, you're really feelin' one plot idea one day, and a completely different idea the next, then write 'em both out and go with what feels better to you. take the alternative scene and put it in your outtakes doc.
write for yourself. whatever it is your creating, be it fiction or nonfiction, you are your audience. don't worry about what other people will think or say because at the end of the day, what you wrote was for you. if people want to see something else, then they're more than welcome to write it themselves. the point of a portfolio like ao3 or nanowrimo is for you to track your own progress and see how far you've come as a writer.
literary devices are your best friends! if used properly, they can elevate your writing so beautifully. find a way to sneak in a simile, metaphor, alliteration, allegories, onomatopoeia, etc. i love writing a good soliloquy or monologue as well, especially when i'm writing something with character introspection. start small with similes and metaphors, and then you can work your way up using heavier hitters. remember: a literary device doesn't necessarily have to be a single line or one paragraph in a fic, the entire work can serve as a metaphor or an allegory.
most importantly, just have fun with it. writing like this is a hobby. now, if you're looking into getting more into technical academic writing, that's a whole other thing that i'm happy to help with as well and actually use my minor in professional writing lmao. but for now, let yourself be creative and have fun with the writing process. use things like music, movies and literature to help you get inspired. the sky is the limit!
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