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so look basically i'm not the previous OP who asked about the makimai gloryhole fic, but i am someone whose life was RUINED by that fic a year or so ago and i'm soglad i found these!!! you (and that anon) really just GET it god
honestly that whole convo 2 months ago has me considering actually making a twitter acct to talk to you n others on this side of the site for once or, hell, trying to write that sequel myself (i wouldn't step on ur toes if you're gonna though!!). cannot stop thinking about toxic makimai cheating, just like i couldn't stop thinking about angsty makimai glory holing. help.
CRIES I never would've thought that gloryholes would impact so many people but damn, this message made my day :( even if I'm 2 weeks late sawry nonnie I kinda forgot about my retrospring for a minute there.
And omg you def should make an account! I'd love to have more moots who are into this shit and honestly, I wouldn't mind if you wanted to take a swing at a sequel? Other nonnie def inspired me and I'm going through my old Makimai playlists so I do have like... the yearning of possibility doing it - but IDK for sure. Def make an account and DM me if you wanna talk about it more, though! Thanks again for the sweet message and I'm glad to see Makimai still has its fans despite the manga being... yk LOL.
MakiMai but it's John Wick!AU and Mai goes on a massive killing spree when Maki, her oh so obedient and leashed sister, is killed right in front of her (incomprehensible)
DAMNIT I'VE NEVER WATCHED JOHN WICK SO I DON'T KNOW THE FULL CONTEXT. Why are there so many John Wick movies is my question... I trust you in it being good though because this brief snipper sounds really hot. Especially with the thought of putting Mai at the forefront of being insane - I'll be honest writing Mai in these types of scenarios appeals to me more than Maki despite the fact I've def done more for Maki. It's been so long since you sent this (I'M SORRY CRIES) but I'd like to hear more now :(((
oooh you wanna get into re8 so badddd 🌀🌀 you wanna know so much about the cult mother miranda runs and the unhealthy adoptive family dynamic and emotional incest rose and miranda have going on 🌀🌀🌀🌀 ooooooo
(still the same MakiMai glory hole pookie)
this is more just a funny mental image but while we're on the stalker angle, the idea of Maki jerking off outside Mai's window and a deciding factor was Maki hearing Mai moan her name once is vastly entertaining to me
maybe Maki will get to hear how she's an awful person this time and maybe it gets her off so hard that even Mai is surprised
truly hasn't left my mind since i read it years ago thank you
Let's pretend I didn't respond late af. Life happened. But sigh... as I said in the last correspondence, Maki becoming a full-on stalker truly does something for me in this AU and I have you to thank for that. I love the stupid little dance they do with each other - the fact they cannot communicate for the life of them so it leads to like, the most dramatic ass scenarios that could've been avoided. Maki jerking off and feeling the thrum of Mai's cursed energy as she gets closer, hearing her name on her lips, that being a deciding factor to practically pouncing on her in the darkness of night on some lone street - it's almost consent, no?
I know you want me back. You can't say it. It's okay. I can't, either.
Ugh... walking Mai home afterward - even if Mai tells her to fuck off. Lingering there. Mai making a sarcastic comment about going back to her girlfriend, forgetting that Nobara has kicked Maki out. Awkward silence. ...Where are you staying, anyway? Don't invite her in. Don't fucking do it. But she's tired. And the house is so dark. And Maki is a bigger boogeyman than any cursed spirit could be.
Okay, fuck, they're hitting again.
Idiots! Idiots, the lot of them I swear!
(continued MakiMai glory hole rambling)
And if Maki got so desperate that she Does Not start stalking Mai and Does Not decide to corner her one night, what then
Would Mai almost be flattered that her sister is finally trying now?
And how much of a fight does Mai pretend to put up when Maki claims her again?
Stay tuned for this and more
Waaaaaaaaaaittttttttt - I had never considered this kind of scenario for a sequel but I think you cracked the code. Maki taking her, middle of the night, almost home after exorcising a spirit. Exhausted and spent, already. Can't put up too much of a fight when Maki corners her, eyes pleading, but her strength severe pulling her into an alleyway. Can you imagine? It's not romantic, just like last time. And, yet... Maki being so close to her, filling her like this, strong arms making sure she doesn't go anywhere - maybe if she squints it's the closest thing a Zenin can get to soulmates.
Love the thought of Mai making some passive-aggressive comment during it about Nobara - doesn't Maki feel shame, she wonders? Silent when Maki fully admits they're not together anymore. How much of an ego boost would it be to hear it's because she was thinking of Mai during their last night together? The implication of it, even? Maki isn't forgiven but Mai lingers once all is said and done.
Maki asks if she can walk her home. Funny. Who's ever heard of a perpetrator wishing to escort a victim home?
(also about MakiMai glory hole fic)
Would cheating Maki get so lost in the guilt and just keep thinking about it that she accidentally moans Mai's name during sex, and would this Nobara dump her ass for it
Also so true, Maki would just be trapped in siscon hell if Mai was alive but still not talking to her
Oh, wait, you're cooking. Hold on let's draft this out together - opening scene, nobamaki having sex, monotony in the rhythms of their escapade that Maki is only half paying attention to. Her mind drifting - no matter how hard she tries - to the encounter with Mai. That's finally getting her going. Nobara thinks she's doing something right so continues her dramatics. Maki imagining the warmth of Nobara's flesh as Mai's body underneath her, the way she looked at the bar, the way she /sounded/ despite trying to be quiet. She moans. Nobara stills. Maki finishes. The couch? Her new homestead. Kidding. Yuta's couch.
Nobara didn't even care that it was her sister's name she moaned. Morality or whatever. Just the fact it was another woman - the bitchiest one on Earth at that.
End scene. Anyway, hell yeah - Maki being in an arguably "okay" place within Jujutsu society but literally feeling like the biggest failure known to man is so my thing. Her own realization by this point that, yeah, a lot of her reasoning was for Mai. And some of it wasn't. But the selfishness of proving her family wrong coincides with Mai having a decent life, anyway. Everything connects back to her somehow. She can't even look in the mirror without seeing Mai looking back. And now she's not talking to her. She also hasn't responded to Maki's text, either. Maybe... she'll need to go to more desperate measures. Or, you know, persistent. Definitely not desperate. They need to... talk about what happened or something. Maki's pretty sure she's read that in a self-help book once. Not that she needs, though. Was the only thing around in a doctor's office.
Sigghhhhh I hate this bitch <3
Kys faggot
Mik do not worry, I have faith in your booty. shake that thang girl.. 💗 U the baddiest baddie w a ph phattie 😢
Will we ever see the sequel or f the glory hole fic? (I really really love that fic and i will sell a kidney just for it)
Funnily enough, I had written a sequel for it that's currently in the depths of my Google drive as we speak. Now, do I think that WIP is a worthy sequel upon rereading? Not really lol. So I do technically have something but I'd likely wanna rewrite it - and rewriting it means I'm currently into JJK again which... tbh I haven't really gotten the spark for. I do think outta any of my Makimai fis tho (besides the multi-chapter one that... got abandoned RIP) it has the most potential. If I do end up writing it I'm probably wanting to focus on the cheating aspect more than I had initially alongside Maki being a complete lunatic who hasn't actually accomplished anything with her life due to Mai still being alive in this universe <3
Ciccio u ain’t seen my question? I said are you a baddie with a fattie?
Random Retrospring anon you have too much faith in a humble Twitter user being a baddie with a fattie and your expectations must be lowered for your own sake and peace of mind </3 And I'll b honest I thought I had accidentally clicked "Generate question" when I saw ur initial one 'cause who in their right mind thinks I give off the aura of being thicc
Mikbates, Are the super senior rumours true 🎤
Makima grooming Maki and Mai, call that MakiMakiMai (delusional)
Can you imagine? First of all, the way Mai would be groomed so easily LOL. I love her, and she's highly intelligent and the more emotionally capable of the twins, but throw in a motherly authority figure that sets off her mommy issues and she's sat. It's sad because, in a way, Makima's behavior wouldn't cause total alarm considering the clan Makimai grew up in. Under the context of Makima merely being another Jujutsu sorcerer, her quirks would be seen as... normal, relatively. And she's a fellow woman subjugated to the misogyny of their culture - perhaps this is her defense mechanism and means of self-preservation. Mai can admire the blending of traditional femininity into cuffed shirts and polished Oxfords worn better than any man in her clan has ever done. Polite and table manners yet casual observation of Mai's bruised wrists and limping gait. Talking about the weather, maybe. Crude, and yet Makima brings it up so easily maybe it was never that taboo of a subject to mention in the first place.
Maki... that would be interesting. She doesn't do well with authority figures and Makima's entire demeanor settles on playing the role of such - until, perhaps, Maki realizes this woman is just as much a dog as she is. Maki has the clan. Makima has... higher-ups, of some sort. No matter where in the food chain you land, there's always someone wanting to pull your leash. And Makima's gaze betrays nothing watching her train - the same polite smile watching Gojo fuck around with his Infinity as it is admiring Maki demolish a training dummy. Makima would find her Heavenly Restriction fascinating, not in the means of a scientific anomaly as Yuki would, more so... uniqueness. Maki, have you ever heard that twins in Jujutsu Society are considered to have one soul split into two bodies? You and Mai are truly the same person. Isn't that interesting?
You know, Maki, a soul split into two vessels means it'll never have the same maximum capacity as a soul inhabiting just one. What does this mean for your threshold? Mai, you know as well as I that sometimes sacrifice is a necessity for the greater good. And you love your sister, no?
Mai, someone I once knew would've loved your devotion being in the splatter of your skull and the creation of heavy steel. Personally, I find the sentiment tasteless.
(Makima would have them fuck before she makes Mai sacrifice herself also lbr)
How do you think the first "official" MakiYoru and KigaYoru encounter happened?
Like after all the buildup, how did that first time fucking each other go?
Offical MakiYoru encounter... God, honestly, I think it occurred as naturally as breathing with the birth of their existence. I can't say anything, in particular, leading up to it other than the inherent balance they strike within each other as the closest in concept and blurred lines between what they represent. I do like the idea of it occurring the first time they possessed a human's flesh, though. New sensations and feelings typically abstract in their biological form that take on a more concrete form inside the mortal body. War, bewildered and somewhat disturbed to feel the warmth of the sun on their skin, the grass underneath their feet, how their sister's grazing touch raised goosebumps on this body. An indulgence of exploration, a teasing incessant - Control grew easily familiar with such form almost as if she's done this before. Maybe, maybe not - as her wandering hands drew over War's shifting muscles. Desire pooling in War's stomach. What is this feeling? Control merely laughs. She's watched humans in their natural environments to know what it means, entails. Coy, vague responses pushing War to the blood-soaked floor where remains and battle lay.
An odd feeling. But War has never felt so connected to their sister as they do when she straddles them like this, merges their bodies - as if puzzle pieces - together into a harmonious singularity. As well as a sword or shield feels in War's hands does Control melts against their flesh. They don't know how to explain it but it's almost... vulnerable. Never would they partake in this with Famine, or Death, or a footsoldier. Control, as she is, will be the first... and for a long, long time afterward, will be the last.
Meanwhile, Kigayoru starts off in something finally snapping. After a millennium of prodding from sister eldest, War indulges her. By now they're aware sex is the name of what they once did with Control, and sex is just as much a tool of power as it is a means of vulnerability. Never again. Sex with Famine is as much a battle with bow and arrow as it is her hips cracking underneath their grip to show who's the top dog between them. Of course, Famine allows every broken bone when the feeling of being so /filled/ overtakes what's hollow and void. It's awful, objectively. Pleasure isn't the focus here. Famine comes, anyway. War strangles her at some point and continues with the limp body, rolled eyes to slitting their wrist and blood drops staining her mouth afterward - Famine's return is just as orgasmic. They can do whatever they want to her and she craves more. This is love and patience and-- well, it's something. It's not the warmth of a familiar body in a shared bed once upon a time, or vulnerability forcing the possessed flesh's heart to beat against the ribcage, but it's... an act. Of love, of violence, of this or that. It'll do. Famine wins due to mediocrity. That's the best she's going to ever get.
Call Quanxi a cowboy the way she'd definitely ride the rest of the Horsemen sisters because I can't stop thinking about how her relationship (sex) with each one would be
I feel like this is you baiting me into dishing out sex HC's for Quanxi and every sister... and it's working!
Oh, Makima. You love your dog-husband-weapon in the same way someone enjoys throwing a ball for their mutt to bring back. Fun, if temporary. No true respect but since when has Quanxi ever had respect for herself, anyway? At least she's pretty to look at and doesn't say anything when you get so angry you're the perpetrator in her losing a valuable eye. But, it's okay. Quanxi can make up for her transgressions in the bedroom with missionary monotony and intense eye contact. Emphasis on the eye's singularity. No, you won't ever consider lowering yourself into giving head but it's practically the same thing when your dog is leashed and smothered between your thighs. She's the best you've had and /will/ have but you'll surely forget such when she's eventually discarded for your eventual focus.
Lemme break out of my second-perspective shtick to offer the dynamic of yaoified-yuri when it involves her and Yoru. Strangely... equal, all things considered. Even though, much like Makima, Yoru does make it quite clear Quanxi is her weapon and all that entails. But at the least, Yoru is a gentleman in shucking Quanxi's slacks and taking what her younger sister wouldn't. It's funny watching humans lose their composure, even if Quanxi is about as stoic as the statues humanity has crafted in Yoru's likeness millennia prior. Raising morale, really. A false resemblance to intimacy grunting and huffing above with the torn bodies of those around as set-dressing. Yoru isn't much of a fan of the fairer sex's form to wear but supposes Quanxi shows her the benefits the first time she bottoms without the involvement of anal. Huh. No wonder women don't require prostates.
Kiga... I think she sees something similar to herself in Quanxi. A void. Unfulfilled. Once whole and left in broken pieces. Her sisters didn't take good care of her, clearly. Kiga isn't sweet but she hides nothing from Quanxi spreading her thighs and asking the woman to devour her. She'll do the same back. Maybe one of them will achieve nirvana and take the other with them. Kidding. Kiga knows how the world works. Quanxi does, too. But there's something maddening in staring at your reflection and saliva pooling on your tongue and your teeth itching to break off into succulent flesh. Quanxi can regenerate when Kiga's resolve breaks and she tears into her like a wild animal, woman's delight, raw and unfiltered but at least Quanxi knew what she was getting into as her bones are being licked clean.
Also how would Fami have dealt with any MakiYoru shenanigans? Jealousy? Hate? Putting them both in their place simultaneously?
Oh, God... silently seething lol? Kiga's manipulation is interesting in the way it differs from Makima's in that I don't think she'd do anything so outwardly... bad. I love Kiga's contradictions in not caring to disguise herself from the general public and yet she so gracefully - even better than Makima! - manages to hide the fact she's a complete fucking monster. She's just a silly little guy! She's so quirky! She loves eating! Meanwhile, she's adjusting the playing board so all the moving pieces will eventually have to fill the spots she wants. She's not a total control freak, double-knotted and leashed type like Makima is, no, she'll make you believe that it was your own doing that eventually led you to your casket.
So with that in mind, I don't think Makiyoru would know of the subtle means she's driving them apart. The blunt drag of her tongue in relishing War while putting down Control, setting them in different boxes as the favorite and the disappointment, a long-con in putting herself down as the fool, the jester, so no suspicion arises while they gradually tear each other to pieces. And the worst part is that I think Famine - the most a devil can have, anyhow - has good intentions. She wants her family perfect, damnit! It's not her fault Control is faulty! It's not her fault she's the eldest and this responsibility falls onto her shoulders! That Death avoids the role she's supposed to play! Someone has to care! And if she must be hated to fulfill her obligations then so be it. Call her the unfortunate guardian. Anything for you, little sister... even if must end in heartache.
A threesome between all of them would go kinda hard with all this in mind, though LOL. The closest to feeling so /full,/ her two little sisters ravishing her in all their hatred but if she squints maybe it's the same as the morbid affection they hold for each other - not for her, of course. Never for her. But to give Kiga a single taste of a 'what-if' would likely lead her slow picking of their relationship into overdrive. Just another taste. Another spoonful. She knows she can't finish her plate and she knows she can't have her stomach swollen but it feels so good and she almost forgot that she was Famine, a horseman of the apocalypse for a split-moment of a second. It needs to end in flames, somehow. Consider it her single indulgence.
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