well…yes! there’s definitely elements i’ll borrow from the existing version, but i’ve had this lingering dissatisfaction with it since I posted chapter two, maybe, and it’s grown as the comments on chapter four rolled in. It won’t take too long, promise, and I have the new outline and everything🙂! I tend to have a track record with lackluster endings, and I want to try and properly wrap things up here and the first version isn’t hitting the way it should.