oo i love this question! from what ive written so far, i love writing bgs breakdown in ch 2 the most! the one where hes seeing gold stains everywhere! i tried really hard to write what i think is an accurate portrayal of an angel being hit with the force of guilt and what they would do with that, and when i imagined the scene, the contrast in my head of the pretty shimmer of gold everywhere vs the way bg basically feels it closing in on him was fun to put into words. i hope i was able to show that the way i wanted to. gold is supposed to be a prevalent detail later on so i wanted every mention of it to feel like it stained the writing, too, if that makes sense?? ahh sorry if it doesnt ><
i also really liked writing the opening freefall scene :> i wrote it to one specific song on loop and everytime the chorus plays i just picture bg falling through a great big sunrise backdrop