THANK YOU youre very kind... i think its interesting to explore how power structures influence how people think of others. naoto has been in an (albeit precarious) auspicious position as both a celebrity and someone who just commands a lot of influence via their intellect and general demeanor, which creates a distance between themself and others... so the condescension that's focused on in h!naoto is just honing on the negative traits of that aspect ^_^

but overall with hayato's verse, you can see that the characters' centerpieces are typically flaws of theirs or parts of them that impede their self-actualization/recovery... i wanted to emphasize them because it makes the journey they make to improve that much more stark, and i don't think h!naoto is going to be an exception hehe... i want to see them smile...