sweetpea · 28d
I'm a little afraid to say this because I don't want it to sound bad, your work is amazing, you have a lot of talent in writing and the way you respond I always feel that you are so kind and sweet. But reading your au Heewon, could it be that the Sunsun has much more prominence than other secondary couples in your aus? I felt that Sunoo came out more and was more relevant than Heeseung in the 1st chapter, and Sunghoon only interacts with Sunoo and not with the protagonists. Maybe I'm wrong or bad so sorry if it bothers you, it was just an observation 🙏🏻
hi !! no worries and thank you so much for enjoying my works hehe !!! sorry if i'm misunderstanding what you're trying to say but i think my explanation would just be that heeseung isn't prominent in the first chapter because jungwon is avoiding him! and sunoo is his best friend and the only person there he plans on talking to there at first so that's why he's so prominent in the first chapter :) and same goes for sunghoon not interacting with anyone other than sunoo, he and jungwon aren't close and don't spend time together so he really only sees him when he's there to see sunoo! and as for why sunsun as a couple are featured so prominently, it's a combination of them both being important people in jungwon's life and also because their relationship is supposed to be comparable to heewon's !! in terms of like how fast they figure things out/how easily a relationship comes for them while heewon struggle to figure out What They Are ! i hope that makes sense, thank you again for reading !! 🫶
