sweetpea · 2mo
u cant keep getting away with making sunoo suffer!!!!! no but jokes aside, i usually do not pay attention to different levels of writing when im readings fics simply because its a pastime to me whatever but since you recently mentioned wanting to improve your writing, i realized how much more the writing pulled me in with auld lang syne! it felt just a tad bit more like i was watching a movie rather than reading a retelling of some stranger’s story so that honestly gave me secondhand pride and i just wanna say props to you, keep up the good work bud
STOPDHFJSHFBSYRHDH ok listen. listen. i think sunoo is probably the most interesting person on earth and that's why i put him in Situations. i just do it so he can always be the third most important character in a fic bc i'm obsessed with his brain i need him to be involved in the plot and unfortunately that means sometimes he must suffer.... BUT he's so fine in auld lang syne he's really just chilling while heejake spiral. love him for that...
and thank u for saying this!!!! i have such a hard time being objective about my own writing it always reads back to me like the worst sentences stringed together in the history of the english language so it's nice to hear that i might actually be improving :') thank u !!!!!! 🫶
