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can you please give advice on writing poly skz especially in the texting?because I know it's not easy and you have already written more than 80 chapters!!!??
I write poly skz but sometimes I have a hard time with texting because it's a bit difficult to find that topic to start the conversation every time..
Hi anon, can you tell me more about what specifically you're having trouble with? Maybe an example?
I'm always happy to talk about writing :)
For me, writing chats is SO much easier than writing prose. Regarding conversation starters, I think I kind of just start very in medias res / by kicking in the door. So... I'm afraid I'm the absolute worst person to ask for advice >.<
I usually have a list of scenes I want to include in a chapter so I already know what needs to happen in a certain conversation, and that usually leads me very organically into a conversation starter. I wonder if having more of a plan for a chat would help you too? Or maybe you could start the chat at a point where it feels easy for you and then come back and write the start of the conversation later?
Some general thoughts about / tips for writing chat fic & OT8:
- not everyone has to reply to every statement every time! there will always be people who talk more and people who talk less in any chat
- if you're writing a scene where everyone is in the same room but they're all texting instead of talking to each other you have to mention a reason for it or it's not believable (ex: staff present, in public, someone is sleeping...)
- if you're unsure if your dialogue sounds natural try reading it out loud
- it's pretty much impossible to write in a way that every member gets exactly 1/8 of the scenes, especially when one relationship is the focus in that chapter / story arc. One thing I do is when I'm almost done with a chapter is I look through my list of scenes and make sure every one has at least one scene / has talked in the chapter. If I've missed someone I add at least a small additional conversation and make a note to write that member more in the next couple of chapters.
Hope this helps a little bit <3
Ik I am being a bad person right now but I really really need the complete fic - "lee know is the guru your heart needs" cause It's the only book I can re read over and over again, the only book which plays with my emotions so much.. honestly I just love the fic with my whole heart
Oh love, I don't think that makes you a bad person at all <3 I'm honestly the same with a bunch of ongoing fics I'm reading XDDD
"Complete" will have to wait a while, but I hope to post a new chapter soon <3
So glad you enjoy the story, and thank you so much for this comment :)
https://www.instagram.com/reel/C90SvBaoEME/?igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA== have you seen this interview where Felix compliments Changbin's hips 💀
Haha, haven't seen it yet, but not surprised that Lix is a fan XD
BABY ALPHA INNIE YESYESYES
it also ties in with innies biting tendencies. just imagine him biting and marking his boyfriends, like marking his territory. he’d be all shy abt it and his need to do it but he just can’t hold back sometimes and just sinks his teeth in. sometimes giving hickeys is too much so instead just biting down enough to leave a mark will do the trick.
-bbycakes anon (👶🧁
You know, concerning that I'm most definitely not writing that, I'm doing an awful lot of thinking about it XD I just have a lot of love for alpha!Innie in general! But yes, the biting TOTALLY fits. Still thinking about how biting -> mating would work out (does it need to happen during heat/rut? during a full moon? some special ritual?). I imagine Chan and Changbin, who are both alphas and who have both been in relationships before, teaching Innie how to hold back / maybe something like Changbin showing him the tooth guard he used that kept him from accidentally biting+mating his ex-girlfriend... so many ideas!!
Thanks for this ask <3
I know you're set on omega!Jisung, but can I just say: alpha!Jisung. The most clumsy alpha, stuttering mess around omega!Minho, cause let's be honest Minho'd hold all the power in that dynamic. The power omega!Minho would hold over this man who pretends to be all strong and tough with his alpha bro's.
To me this would also make the 3retcha dorm dynamics funnier with 3 alphas and Hyunjin. Hyunjin would have a field trip my god.
Anyways alpha!Jisung brainrot is real.
Ugh, anon, don't tempt me like that! I think in the context of the guruverse omega!Sung makes the most sense, but I absolutely agree with this interpretation as well ______ That's the interesting part of omegaverse to me, that depending on which part of their personality / interests you focus every designation makes sense for every member. Even more so if you write non-traditional omegaverse of course :)
That one hyunsung scene in chapter 77 of guruverse pt 1 (ignore existing caption): https://twitter.com/myunclesmemes/status/1320292820733878272?t=avqzDmVG_S3i6pvRCB1TWw&s=19
I want you to know that I gigglesnorted when I opened that link, this is 100% HyunSung XD <3
ok ok hear me out 👻 all the reasons for omega!Minho could work if he's a beta but not the other way around
- power bottom - absolutely works, especially with accent on the "power", something betas aren't really supposed to have OR want over others, especially alphas.
- the other omegas are his babies - who feel super safe with him because, as you've said, he's not (as?) affected by their heats and can be there for them at all times!! he's their rock!!!
- pack luna - ok this one won't be a direct parallel, but having a designated pack beta, who's calm and reasonable when others aren't and can be their connecting link, is also super cool.
- Minho nesting with Changbin's clothes and pretending he isn't interested in Changbin at all - THIS was where you had me with omega!Minho tbh because ADORABLE but also consider: what if secondary gender is more of a spectrum and beta!Minho just happens to be a bit more sensitive to alpha pheromones than he "should" be. omega-leaning beta who is more likely to get induced heats than ruts and gets some typical omega impulses in those, including nesting. as a bonus, this could make for an interesting reinterpretation of the hyunho dynamic, with Hyunjin being worried that Minho cares about him but isn't actually INTO him, and Minho just taking a bit longer to fully feel non-alpha pheromones.
"Answering" this now even though it's been six months since you left me this great note, anon, I'm SO sorry. I find betas!2min especially interesting, actually, and I think Minho being the older beta / more in charge (?) opens up so many possibilities~
Thanks for leaving me this ask, and again: I'm so sorry, I have no excuses, please accept this virtual hug <3
"You might think this is just a funny moment, but you have no idea what this conversation is actually about" - afsgdh is it by any chance related to that conversation H and F had about the candidates for his first time 👀 happy to accept any surprise of course but this came to mind
Nope, sorry, that's not it ;)
(but that very conversation will be important later, so don't forget about it!)
<3
I am so excited that you are finally back! So excited to see the future development of the story)) plsplspls any crumbs ?
Hi anon! Please ask me this question again in a month or so once I've gotten back into the rhythm of writing this fic <3
I'm not even all the way caught up on my own notes yet and honestly have no idea what I've teased at yet >.< But the next couple of chapters will have a lot more (and more explicit) MinBin and MinLix + friends, as well as more (but definitely not as explicit) SeungIn / HyunIn.
Innie getting punished by minho ahhh for ur fic where they text I'm a03!! The one with 80 chapters. Like cuz he's on a diet and he sometimes doesn't take care of himself cuz he overworks also he's been saying a lot of bad things about himself irl like how he's fat or chubby and needs to diet more or how he can't eat. It's actually super sad and no one really talks about it. Also he lost sm weight
Hi anon, I'm not taking prompts right now unless I explicitly ask someone for one. Thanks for understanding!
Ughhhhh these arguments for beta!Minho are so good I'm almost ready to forget omega!Minho...
Especially with that heat/rut induced thing? I've never read any of it before!
How exactly would that look? I don't think I've fully grasped the concept but it sounds interestinggg~
Also, would it mean that after having induced ruts (as a consequence of being w chan( he would have a problem being around the omegas, opposed to before?
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Hey you ;)
I'm pretty sure I got the concept of influenced/triggered heats/ruts for betas from this fic: https://archiveofourown.org/works/31099799/chapters/76839263. I would basically mean that as a beta Minho could go into heat if the alpha he's with goes into rut, and if he's with an omega in heat he would go into rut. Of course there would also be some sort of suppressants / pheromone blockers to stop that from happening. I'm still thinking the concept through myself, but I think it would need extended exposure / bonds to trigger a heat/rut in a beta like this, since otherwise betas would be susceptible to every rutting alpha in the world and that just wouldn't make sense.
Also, would it mean that after having induced ruts (as a consequence of being w chan( he would have a problem being around the omegas, opposed to before?
Nah, it would just mean that Minho can't keep telling himself that Chan is not special to him ;)
sparklining i have MILLIONS of thoughts abt omega mnho ... if u thought he was a power bottom now just take a second. and imagine how much worse it could get. beta seungmin being his personal sex toy. i just think its too good to pass up.
Anon omg at this point I'm so torn I'm making lists like this XDD
Reasons for omega!Minho:
- power bottom
- the other omegas are his babies
- pack luna (mirrors: the dance leader to Chan's group leader)
- Minho nesting with Changbin's clothes and pretending he isn't interested in Changbin at all
Reasons for beta!Minho:
- remember what I wrote about MinChan fucking shortly after the survival show? Would alpha!Chan be more likely to give into beta!Minho who tells him it's not that serious?
- beta!Minho thirsting for knots mirrors bottom!Minho loving butts in guruverse
- betas who can have influenced/triggered heats or ruts depending on their partners (but also: beta!Minho who has no problems hanging around the omegas in heat because he's never had an influenced rut in his life, but then goes into an influenced heat the first time Chan goes into rut once they're together)
- kind of into beta!2min having the same role in the pack but being completely different
Hi !! I just want to share my thoughts about omeguruverse and the subgenders because I can't stop thinking about it !!
Innie would be so cute as an alpha, like a shy baby alpha, I love the idea so much T-T, but he could be a shy and cute beta too !!
I think Changbin should be an alpha too, because it would fit the ChangLix problems ofc, but also the bro relationship of Binchan who-don't-dare-to-kiss-each-other, because of their pride as alphas even though they crave it (especially Binnie). I imagine Minho as an omega as much as a beta actually, but him being an omega could be so.... like do you see the concept of "Luna" in a/b/o ? A Luna is a bit like an alpha in a pack... I see him so much as a Luna ??? But in his own way of course, because it's Minho...
For Seungmin I don't know... I see him as a beta or an alpha, both sound good for him T-T
Hello double-exclamation-mark-anon (<3!!)
alphas!BinChan is honestly exactly what I want in life ______ I think generally Changbin could go with any dynamic, but BinChan both being alphas would just fit so well into what I'm doing with them in guruverse :3
I'm still SO torn on Minho. Pack Luna would make so much sense (and yes, I love that concept in fic too), especially since it mirrors the whole Chan as leader of the group / Minho as dance leader thing so well ___
I have another ask about this where I'm going to expand on why I think both omega and beta make sense for Minho in the guruverse.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts <3
https://www.instagram.com/reel/C0EBRkAKMKt/?igshid=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==
This is kind of how i see drunk hyunin interacting 🥺🥺🥺🥺
That is probably not inacurate XDD
There's also that one clip from Fandom Tour (?) where Hyunjin shakes his hair back and you can SEE Innie fall in love with him. It's great. I adore them so much 🥰
So about the omeguruverse that you're totally not writing...
I'm absolutely on board with whatever decide, but I feel like we cannot just omit the possibility of omega!Changbin - I feel like that would still give enough ground for ChangLix's problems with having sex, but also just thinking about BinChan in this constellation .....................
Idk it probably doesn't hold up for all the skz dynamics but I wanted to share my brain rot,,, just imagine SeungBin like this .....just... i m a g i n e
Also I don't get this whole bbycakes anon thing but I think it's super cute?? ㅠㅠ
- küken (not-so-)anon lol
Et tu, Brute? You're all terrible enablers XD ♡♡
You should get in my DMs and tell me more about this dynamic because I'm not 100% seeing it but I am Interested :3 Especially about how omegas!ChangLix would work but also those SeungBin thoughts... what would Seungmin's subgender be then?
Bbcakes anon is an anon who kept calling me bbcakes - and you know how quickly I give out nicknames, little chick :*
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