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new heejake vamp fic was the FIC LIKE. that just made me want to fall in love so deeply and be so devoted to someone!! ure a legend dude INSANEEEEEEEEEEEEEE im gonna def come back and reread it soon cuz i couldnt get enough.. just like heejake :p
Ubiiiii, your story was so delicious, I literally refused to do anything else until I finished it cause I was so hooked! 😭✋🏻
just found your acc and read the heejake vampire fic, what a masterpiece ಥ‿ಥ
ubi i already commented on your fic about jake's characterization but i just wanted to say again how much i loveeeeeeeee him and heejake in the first taste 😍🥰😞 ive read a few vampire-slash-supernatural-creature x human fics with jake in it and he's often the human which I LOVE and makes a lot of sense but it's so fun to see a new dynamic and a new take with jake as the vampire this time. and i love how despite jake being the ~sexy strong powerful supernatural creature~ this time, the power dynamics in the fic is still soooo heejake! and vampire jake is still so quintessentially jake! as a i said in my comment, he's so puppy-like (like jake irl) and i love that even though he's the vampire between them, there's this aspect of heejake's dynamics where heeseung has so much power over him and is able to tame(?) him and jake basically hangs onto heeseung's every word. like the scene in the couch with their friends where jake almost bites him and he's like "Jaeyun." all serious and in italics THAT SCENE IS SO DELICIOUSSSSSSS like OMFJRBFJTRNRUDJSJSSJSJSH bites fist. But despite jake being all that it doesn't feel imbalanced at all because heeseung so obviously worships and treasures jake 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 he really would die for him omg 🥹
and last! ig something i'd love to read more of (if you decide to add to the story or if ever you just wanna talk about jake's character more) is jake's pov vis-a-vis insecurities about being a vampire, feeling like a monster, having to hide parts of himself from heeseung.... my sweet baby 😞🥹🥰
hi again!!! thx for commenting bc i still have a Lot i to say abt jake's character hahaa. firstly, the supernatural jake/human hee dynamics were very fun to explore and the power balance was something that i LOVED writing cause like, imagine your boyfriend has literal non-human abilities and power in his lineage and all he wants to do is nibble on you? so im glad you liked that too. the scene on the couch near the beginning i also love bc i wanted it to show their dynamics as a couple but also get a bit into why they're so obsessed w each other.
about that scene ^, obviously they had a bond formed already at that point, and it was very new when they had to separate for four months and do long distance, so it really amplified all those feelings of need and caused all the separation anxiety they get. jake, despite being a vampire, has never formed a bond with a human before so he didn't really know all the affects of having them be apart for months with a fresh bond between them that needed nurturing. ykwim?
lastly, i would definitely not be opposed to writing another fic from jake's pov. perhaps set from earlier on in there relationship to showcase his insecurities before the end of this fic where they worked thru a lot of them. to scratch the surface on that, basically since he was born in the city where a majority of vampires reside, he isn't used to being around people who aren't accustomed to vampires. once he found out heeseung was from a small town he panicked a bit and it sent him spiraling about how to not freak heeseung out with his "vampire-ness" and scare him off, which he didn't want to happen because he liked heeseung so much. there's probably also some past issues (family related) that would cause him to act this way too, like his parents warning him to be careful around humans ever since he was little. heeseung mentions in the fic that jake has never talked to him much about his family, nor has he met them, so it would be interesting to get into some of that. anyways, i wouldn't be opposed to writing more from this universe :)
(also i agree, heeseung would 100% die OR kill for jake. he doesn't play about that boy, seriously)
again, thank you for reading and for liking it and for loving jake's character AND for reaching out to ask me about him :D you're so lovely! <3
i’ve read all ur fics and i can’t wait for the new one now!! is it heejake?
hi! since a previous anon talked about my heart is yours fic i also wanted to say that it's one of my fav heejake fics of all time... i always come back to it every now and then. it's so so so perfect and chapter 3 is engraved into my brain forever
AHH chapter three is my fav as well TT it’s so cool to hear that people like, continue to think about my fics after they’ve finished reading. it’s just always fun to hear that they’ve made an impression. thank you anon you are so sweet and if u ever have any more thoughts or q’s abt it… feel free to reach back out :P
hi ubi!
just want to let you know that i finished my heart is yours (squeeze it apart, that's fine) today and it was really good. i liked it a lot 🥺 they are everything for me :( im happy i could find this fic tho I was searching on the ao3 for something kinda cute and they were perfect for that. yk hee is the hyung but for me he is the cutest one aiaidieiwjsjsjs the way he was so excited about ikeu was soooooo cute :(((
hehe i agreeee i cant help but always write hee as lovesick its so cute to me... he's a hopeless romantic in all of my fics i fear (and in real life too TT). im so happy you liked it and thank you for reaching out to lmk! ik it isn't the cutest fic (theres a bit too much angst for that) but im glad it was a good read for you regardless!!! <3
Hi Ubi! I wanna be friends with you so bad :( i read all your stories after reading your Cowboy H33 story!!
https://x.com/CHACONNlKl/status/1794765713019928942?t=Cbf_jfjx73uGZFGJlbKDvQ&s=19 this is literally hee from ur newest fic,,, throwing stone at the windows and holding flowers,,,
Hiii (I'm raina) 🍰🍓 Hope you're well!! Just wanted to say how difficult this week was for me, I won't burden you, but just know that "my heart is yours (squeeze it apart, that's fine)" kept me going. Heejake in the kitchen, being all in love, and Heeseung as comfort personified made me feel SO so happy. I couldn't Not mention the impact your writing has.
Sorry if this is long, just wanted to say this. Pls take care and stay hydrated/warm (the weather here is not stable so idk what to wish lol maybe both at the same time)!! ❤️🫂🫂
raina!!! this is such a sweet message truly, you don’t know how happy it makes me that something i wrote was able to help you through a tough week. i’m so glad to hear that my heejake could serve as a form of comfort- ive definitely had fics that have done that for me, so it’s very nice to hear that heeseung in my fic made u feel a similar way. it’s always such a pleasure to see u in my inbox, pls don’t let a bad week drag u down. things will start to look up soon!! thank you again 🫶🏻 :’)
ubi..... i don't know how you feel about this but settle down by the 1975.... it's SO MY HEART IS YOURS.... i think it's them... i can never get it out of my head
pls dont listen to the polls these people dont know anything. a country boys au WOULD SAVE ME
hi my heart is yours ruined me i literally space out at work sometimes bc i can’t stop thinking about it i hope you love writing bc it clearly loves you i hope both sides of your pillow stay nice and cold
your latest fic was lovely! i especially enjoyed how you highlighted emotions and anxiety in it. you need to write 4ever
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