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tash · 7 answers · 2y

do you have a favourite line or scene you've written? 💕

I saw this message last week and I've been thinking about what to answer, but I think the truth is I don't really attach myself to any of my fics enough to have a favorite line or scene. Nothing that sticks out to me as a point of pride, anyway! Writing for me, is more something that I can do as opposed to a craft I work hard at honing, so maybe that's where the indifference comes from? I mean, I can't even name a favorite work I've written, haha.

I'm sorry, this is a lame answer!! Thank you for the question, though, Tash!! <3

WRITTEN? oh boy. probably something from countless rps. I can't remember anything specific though. Current rp for space au we're doing with zel is my fav so far <3

aaaa sorry i just saw this and then retro deleted my response lol. but! that's a really fun question omg. my fave line would probably be from ch 8 of keep your faith, "Akira could never be his, because the world Goro chose was one of deceit and betrayals, not playful banter and nights wrapped in intimacy." i think it hits pretty hard from an emotional standpoint, while also being well articulated from a writing standpoint, imo? as for scenes, i think my fave would actually be a scene from the upcoming penultimate chapter of keep your faith....👀 tysm for the question!

one of my favorites is from my first fic “a fools errand”, the scene where Goro kisses akira’s forehead after looping a couple of times, and then finishing the job once more after that brief moment of tenderness,, i just really like how that turned out ;-; thank you tashtash 💕💕

ooo thank you for the ask!!! i probably have a few but this one sticks out to me the most:

“Love is like a seed,” Hanasaki said, stepping forward to press the packet into his hand. “It needs to be nurtured in order to bloom. […] And even if it does, it isn’t guaranteed to survive. When that happens we have to remove its roots and start again. But that doesn’t mean we forget the flower we lovingly cared for,” Hanasaki continued to say, turning around and offering Akira his bouquet again, “or how beautiful it was while it lasted.”

-only fools rush in, chapter 4

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