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Anonymous Coward · 6mo

Writing tips?

I am the wrong person to be asking.

Anyways, the more you pull apart a story, or even just characters, the more connected things become. Don't write like you're trying to connect pieces of cloth by sewing them together, write like you're pulling apart felt so you can mix it to get a new color.

Anonymous Coward · 6mo

Would Isa listen to Mitski?

She was inspired by Lush (the album)... and other second album which will be more apparent when chapter 4 releases hahhaa.

Anonymous Coward · 6mo

character design tips?

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

What are psychedelics like?

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

Where are the horror elements

I accidentally made all the horror deeply personal and impossible to understand to outside viewers >-<

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

Most obscure influences for WBEC?

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

how can you criticize anime for pervy shots and then write about max oogling fox legs

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

If it was buff men instead of women in anime you would be all about it

Literally the main reason I don't really like dungeon meshi is because they (still) do it

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

How big that penis

Anonymous Coward · 7mo

Favorite writing tropes?

When a character is built up to be someone you like throughout the story, and then at the verrrrry end they reveal that the character did something absolutely UNFORGIVABLE.

Anonymous Coward · 8mo

Biggest writing pet peeve?

When people turn "twitter" or "youtube" into like, "barker" or "ToobTube" Like you know that you can just call it twitter you don't have to make up a new version.

Anonymous Coward · 8mo

Update on Chapter 3?

I have finals + I have to move + I have to find a job back home during the summer. It's pretty close to done, I'd guess it'll be ready mid-late may.

Anonymous Coward · 8mo

Why does the jorts+tank top combo have a strangle hold over FVN women

Anonymous Coward · 8mo

How do you approach writing arguments? I struggle so much with them

The way that Cole and Isa bicker is directly inspired by the way I would argue with my friends in late middle/early high school. It's petty, it's rooted in a lot of history, it looks RIDICULOUS to anyone outside of the problem. It's also a lot more venomous than you know.

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