Possibly Goku in Disguise · 1y
How would you recommend improving one’s smut writing? Specifically inflation of course. I feel like the main thing I struggle with is coveying things to the audience (I.e size, shape, description.). Do you have any tips to for someone looking to improve in that regard?
Don't use numbers for describing size in inflation. You can use numerical measurements later once you've practiced more and understand how overusing them can be annoying.
Don't stress over trying to convey every little detail of a scene. Build enough to where your audience can fill in a bit on their own. Your beach ball size and theirs will be different and that's alright.
It's okay to look at another story and use their descriptions for sizes and shapes as a guideline to form your own. Try to give your own original twist obviously, but references work in writing like they do in drawing.
You'll get better. And you'll always worry you're not better enough. Worry less about sucking and more about getting words on the page.
