Venya8008

Possibly Goku in Disguise · 11mo

how to not pop from air pressure while floating into sky, time sensitive please respond

Eh you'll be fine

Venya8008 · 11mo

Fwoomp · 11mo

How did Suzie become affiliated with anything inflation related? Like, was it some sort of average fetish awakening or was it something more than that?

She always had a burgeoning interest in P-Balloons as a topic of study and began asking questions like 'what if these only affected my boobs?' during her high school years that set her down the path towards full-on inflatophilia.

Venya8008 · 11mo

Silent Sev #7442 · 11mo

how many of your characters would have Wikipedia pages in their respective worlds?

Amelia would have one for her superhero persona.

Suzie has a short one crediting her as the inventor of the P-pump.

Samantha, if her world was in modern times, would have one under cult leaders. She would find this hilarious.

Venya8008 · 11mo

Possibly Goku in Disguise · 1y

How would you recommend improving one’s smut writing? Specifically inflation of course. I feel like the main thing I struggle with is coveying things to the audience (I.e size, shape, description.). Do you have any tips to for someone looking to improve in that regard?

Don't use numbers for describing size in inflation. You can use numerical measurements later once you've practiced more and understand how overusing them can be annoying.
Don't stress over trying to convey every little detail of a scene. Build enough to where your audience can fill in a bit on their own. Your beach ball size and theirs will be different and that's alright.
It's okay to look at another story and use their descriptions for sizes and shapes as a guideline to form your own. Try to give your own original twist obviously, but references work in writing like they do in drawing.
You'll get better. And you'll always worry you're not better enough. Worry less about sucking and more about getting words on the page.