i am madly obsessed with the knives/kidnapping snippet I feel strongly you would do these themes justice and by justice I mean that your vocabulary and writing is so sharp and powerful it's like a perfect match!! also, I love the new chapter from Fever, the way it helps my imagination spin in a good, happy way. "Jsvng’s lips form a perfect little ‘o’. Mnho imagines kissing him until they’re raw and bruised. " just right here I am able to visualize the scene, and also get a hint of both their personalities. i am eagerly rubbing my gremlin hands for more of your writing and I can't wait to see what magic you concoct next!