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THIS STORY IS SO GOOD OMG!!!
I have a lot of doubts about the whole hyvnjinxjisvxminh0 situation from the previous chapter (and this one too). How did minh0 find out that hyvnjin had asked jisv out on a date? Why did jisv lie to hyvnjin to cancel the date? And why were they both together at ch4n's house afterwards and treated hyvnjin like that? Mainly her (I guess minh0 was acting that way to make hyvnjin mad). But jisv? mmmm I hope you explain this in the next chapter hehe
(English is not my first language, sorry)
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. This chapter was so massive and had the climax included that there is still a lot left unanswered. Things about Felix, Minho, Jisu, and Hyunjin will definitely be explained in the final chapter but it's quite a bit and the chapter was already long enough.
Sorry that it's not much of an answer to your questions but I don't want to spoil anything! You should hopefully have the answers you're looking for in the last chapter :)
What do you mean act XII got really, really dark? Don't do this to us. I'm so excited to read it. Also, I wanted to say that you're an excellent writer. I love reading your fanfics.
It's the climax of the story, anon! Gotta have the angst dialed up to 11. Hope everyone can enjoy it, though. Its...a ride, haha.
Hi! I hope you're having a great week. I have a question. I remember reading a scene on ISYA where sevngm!n, ch4ngb!n, and ch4n were bothering hyvnh0 because they've caught them in intimate situations a few times (if you know what I mean). I was wondering if we're going to get one of those scenes in this story before it ends. It would be so much fun! Thank you so much for sharing your writings with us <3
The scene they were referring to was the one with Hyvnho in the kitchen which is in one of the earlier chapters already. When Sevngmn says things like "the amount of times I've walked in on you two sucking face" he just means kissing or making out - nothing too spicy. So, it was only that one time.
Just had time to read the new chapter and. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. The ending is doing my head in bc 1 hhj please learn communication skills im going to start crying and 2 how did lmh even know hhj asked jisu to go out like obvs he’s not doing this bc he likes jisu he’s just doing this to get back at hhj i would assume
Or maybe it’s completely different and he has no idea about it maybe he was invited to whatever family thing jisu had and was actually joking when he saw hhj and put his arm around her to which obviously hhj took badly bc his emotions are all over the place
Man idk but im stressed i need them to be back soon because i can’t take it
It was going well 😔 (ANYWAYS I LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER AND CANT WAIT FOR MORE)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the update! It felt a little cruel to leave off at a cliffhanger but hopefully that will just make the next update that much sweeter. All your questions will absolutely be answered by the end of the fic.
🐶 acts very immature. He's always bothering 🥟 with things that he knows will make him angry but it's 🥟 who everyone ends up calling immature. I wish they could go back to being friends like when they were kids. But I've already read ISYA and well...
It might seem that way but I think the relationship between them is a little more complicated than that. Let me try to explain here (SM is actually one of my favorite pack members to write).
The characters in the pack are meant to be a little more complex. Just like in real life, people grow up and grow apart and sometimes find themselves back together. That's sort of the case between SM and HJ.
For me, SM's character is just sarcastic and doesn't hold back. He has no filter. HJ even mentions that SM was like that when theyvwere friends, too; its just his personality (I am very much the same in my offline life).The first time their wolves fought, SM antagonize hin bc he knew CN wasn't going to and HJ needed that extra push to finally shift. So that was actually in HJs best interest. Other than that, yeah he tends to start things but I think partly it's bc HJ always gives him the reaction, too. And both CN, CB, and MH have called SM out but HJ is the one who turns an altercation into something physical. He's wild and unpredictable where SM never intends for it to get to that point.
HJ and SM did sort of have their talk in IOHY after HJs first shift where SM explains that and they have a bit of an understanding. In the moat recent update, they get in a fight because HJ gets embarrassed about getting teased. A sore spot for SM is MH. SM's closest friend is 100% MH, someone he trusted to be intimate with for the first time. So HJ bringing that up when SM didn't know that HJ knew was a bit of a shock. Did he overreact? Maybe, but HJ could've just owned up to being involved with MH and that could have been it
In ISYA, SM and HJ fight side by side to protect JS and FX against vampires and HJ actually lashes out after one of them hurts SM and SM saves HJ from being k!lled. Also, there are scenes where while watching a movie, HJ has his head resting on SM's thigh so I think it's safe to say they settle their differences.
Hope that explained things a bit. I love all my pack members in the Yllw Wd verse and, for me, their individual personalities and flaws or quirks make for interesting conflicts, resolutions, story progressions. It's all love between, eventually, the 8 of them though so don't worry 💚
I'm realizing I might be the only person who never considered that Minho is on a date with Jisu when Hyunjin sees them... Like I know Minho wouldn't do that, I'm so sure 🥲 I'm more worried for Minho's feelings because as much as I love this Hyunjin and understand his reasoning (we are in his head after all) it still tore in that after how much he had with Minho, even subconsciouly considering them mates, he turns around and asks Jisu out. And I'm very aware that Hyunjin isnt thinking 'lets cheat on Minho' at ALL, hes just so in denial about dating a man after his talk with his father that he pulled a Yellowwood Hyunjin and panicked and retreated to whatever would fastest 'fix' (or hide or put a bandaid over) the 'problem'. (I love your Hyunjin I feel like I'm making it seem like I dont 😭). But oh god if Minho did find out through Changbin or something that Hyunjin asked Jisu out after they'd confirmed so much with the imprinting and spilled their hearts out, even Minho who is less inclined to do that with others... like that must HURT. But I'm also going on a whole rabbithole when we don't yet know why they're there! Regardless very excited for some lovely angst 🥺💙
Huh, never heard anyone tell me that before tbh. It's very endearing to me how invested you are in the emotional well-being of these two lol.
I'm usually pretty loose-lipped about what's to come but I'm really holding my cards close for the conclusion here. All I can promise is. as always, angst - a lot of it - but also a very nice happy ending. It has to be if we saw them in ISYA, right? 😉
why do i think it's not actually m!nh0?? like i don't remember if there's a supernatural in this story who could shapeshift to another human or create an illusion or something but idk 😭 I just simply can't believe he would do that. i trust him I TRUST HIM.
That's a very interesting theory 👀
I totally have a theory about whats going on but i dont know whether i want to say or not🤔
I mean, I love hearing theories. I won't conform or deny if they're correct though lol. This late in the game I have to keep some sense of mystique for everyone, haha.
M!nh0, I hope you have a good explanation...
Everything happens for a reason 👀
every chapter of every f!c you write is like a present..! its ok if it takes a a little while or a long time or ultimately even if a f!c never finishes at all. your f!cs are very enjoyable to read and think about. there are f!cs out there that are incomplete and last updated 2021 and i still go back and read them because i like them. your f!cs have such good story and characters and a really wonderful charm to them that is irreplaceable, so i at least feel no sort of impatience in the time between chapters because I can just reread the old chapters (ive read the tw!l!ght series as a whole 5+ times and have not gotten bored of it for example!) and be happy. asking you to write more or to write faster would be looking a gift horse in the mouth 💕 your writing is yours specifically and its amazing so its definitely worth any amount of wait ^^ (after all you have your whole life to attend to first before being able to sit and write)
That's very kind and truly appreciated. I read a lot, too, and it definitely can be frustrating for a reader to not have an update in a while but some authors (talking about my own personal experiences here) need time.
For me, I can't post something if I'm not fully satisfied with it. I don't have a beta so it's all on me to edit things and nitpick and ask my kind friends to read things for me just so I can make sure I'm not going crazy lol. So it's a longer process. Even with an outline, sometimes I'm just not in a creative mood to write and when I have pushed myself, I end up hating those scenes. I can tell my voice isn't in them. And that's no service to my story or the characters in them - especially with IOHY because it's an important story to tell (at least, in my brain it is). I just want to get it right, if that makes sense?
aa that sounds so good!! i love you f!cs for many reasons but youre really good with characte devlopment and i can absolutely already see how that could come with jsvng's situation and meeting chn. will be always (patiently) excited
That really means a lot to know there are readers out there who actually want to read the things I write. I struggle a lot with feeling like the stuff I put out isn't good enough or that readers will fall off because I'm a bit of a slow writer so - thank you! That's very kind.
my au was planned to be about ace tra!ner hyvnjn who's main partner is a dr4g0na!r! chngbn, a tra!ner more focused on getting strong and becomng a champion (but is more headstrong in his dedication than strategic) sees hyvnjn and his dr4g0na!r and immediately is interested. hyvnjn is beautiful to him (oc, its chngjn after all) but most of all he wants to know how hj aquired such a rare and powerful pkmn (maybe from a reg!on that doesnt have dratini normally..! i need to find which one still). he goes to get close to hj, partially to flirt and mainly to delve into how he got his strong rare p0kemn team. hj is closed off, chngbn doesnt realize in his blind determination but hj can tell that he's after strong pkmn without understanding how important the bond and the care is. but they end up in some situations that pit them working together (villain teams attacking, etc) and chngbn has his awakening through that and its char development and they do get closer over time.. tangent ending because i could keep going on 🥲 thank you for asking about it. if you do post a pkmn au one day know that i will be the first subscribed and followng dedicatedly 🔥
Aw that sounds amazing! Let me know if you ever post it!
In my au, all the kids aside from Jsng are trainers in the league and Jsng is from another region, never wanted to be a trainer, but when his relative (haven't decided whom) passes, he's left with these pkmn and a legacy to uphold.
Like an inexperienced trainer, he has no idea the order and challenges the dragon master, Chn, first and gets his ass kicked lol. After talking to Chn's sister, he realizes the error of his ways and has Chn teach him how to be a proper trainer to take on the league.
ur game list hello!! what is your fav pkmn game! 👀 whats ur fav pkmn if yo have one? i love pkmn so its really neat to hear (i even have a pkmn tra!ner a.u in progress atm lol)
Another loaded question! Lol. I think the one I had the most fun playing was Black and White. Scarlet and Violet were pretty solid too...and Heart Gold...as for pkmn that depends what gen are we talking about?
If we're talking OG: gngr, stryu, and vlpx are always my top picks.
I also had a pkmn au for chnsng but it got put aside for Yllw Wd universe. What was your au about? I love when people are able to pull off a good pkmn au!
which fn4l fntsy is your favorite?? love those games
Oh that is a hard question.
FFX is probably my most beloved video game of all time. It was my first from the franchise that I owned when it came out (that I didn't have to steal from my older brother's room lol). I remember my parents gifted it to me for Christmas when I was like...11? Along with my PS2. My husband and I danced to "Suteki Da Ne" at our wedding for our first dance.
That being said, Sqll from FFVIII is one of my favorite characters from the franchise.
FFXVI is a very close runner up for favorite game. My husband and I were absolutely addicted since the game dropped and I've even written fanfic for it that I will likely never post lol. FFXV was also very, very good though I absolutely hated the ending.
Literally I can talk about video games, especially FF all day. My husband and I just started VII Rebirth like...two nights ago. Much love to the franchise. I grew up watching my brother play the games until I was old enough to play them myself.
do you know about gensh!n imp4ct? i started playing and the character i just met named Kaeya reminds me so much of ur twil!ght series mnh0 in the way he talks and behaves
I've heard of the game but I never played it. I'm a hardcore fnl fntsy girlie. That's like one of the only super immersive, hours to complete games I'm normally into. But I trust your judgment on that lol. Love characters like Yllw Wd Mnh.
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