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hihihihihihihi this'll be long- i'm vibrating aggressively as i write this
i've spent the past week reading AtR and FoF and i've just now finished chapter eleven.
now i was gonna write this after finishing the other two chapters first, but i desperately needed to come in here after that chapter and just- thank you.
thank you for writing this world and this story i am in ruins constantly due to it but i am also so so in awe because the way you write is so captivating. i've never been so invested in a story before and i am just absolutely hooked now. your world building and magic system have me so fascinated and i just wanna sit down and learn all there is to know. the way you write everyone's stories and depth has me so obsessed with them, your villains are terrifying and so so well written, the whole "villain"/morally gray arc concept youre going for just has me- so proud. like idk you, but i am so proud of you because just- wow you are truly just so talented as an author. i am so lucky to get to witness your work.
back to chapter eleven though, i just finished it and am in absolute tears. SO SO SOFT. the terms of endearment they use towards one another have me so so emotional and then just the utter gentleness of that entire scene was so beautifully well written and i was just awestruck by how soft and pretty it was. it hurt ofc, but just- the love- the adoration- the tiny words mumbled sleepily at the end had me making the most pained sounds, but i just genuinely have to thank you. you are a blessing to humanity and your words are a blessing to my eyes.
good day :)
Ahhhhhhhh thank you so much!! 🥰🥰
The cave scene in Ch. 11 actually originally wasn’t gonna go anything like how I ultimately wrote it; it was gonna be mostly just mnho dissociating the whole time (which, like, that would’ve been totally valid too tbh) but I decided last-minute that I wanted the scene to be more like a showcase of the bond between mnho and jsvng, aaaaaaand the scene became THAT haha. I’m glad I seemed to have made the right choice there!!
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