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[shakes tin can] penny for your tinhatting thoughts?
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Your geonmaet au is so good. Will we see a sequel for it?
your geonmaet socmed au is so funny 😭 the dialogue is so well written, i’m laughing so hard scrolling thru the thread while at a restaurant rn 😭😭 i will be seated for future aus!!
i loved your geonmaet twitter au!!!!!! it was so cute i was literally smiling the whole time i read it. also gyub rabid seokryudan made me chuckle a bit i totally see it. thanks for brightening my day!!!
Best geonmaet socmed au ever
i will never get tired of socmed aus i love it here 10/10 i loved every second
your geonmaet scmed au IS SO CUTE I LOVE IT I NEED MORE OF THIS TYPE AUS AAAAAA I LOVE IT I LOV U THANK U SO MUCH ,YOU MADE MY DAY ♡♡♡♡♡♡ I HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZONG MONTH, YEAR, DECADE, CENTURY AND LIFE
you're like. my absolute favourite. like it's actually insane. i LOVE your work and I'm excited to Devour whatever you release!!!
URE ONE OF MY FAVE WRITERS MWA ILYYYYYYYY
your au was SO GOOD I love #1 idgafer maet 💙💙
THAT GEONMAET SOC MED AU I AM ACTUALLY SCREAMING IT WAS SO GOOD! I was sat and seated the entire upload time and I’m so glad you posted it as complete 😭😭😭 it was so much fun!!! their characterizations were so on point (esp maet fully in his fans replies like… yeah he would and probably IS lmao). thank you for the good food!!!! 🩵🩵
omg ur socmed au was so good!! it was rly cute and funny like im abt to turn your notifs on i won't beg for you to write another ill just say i loved it and i luv everything u write 🩷
I'M IN SHAMBLES THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE MASTERPIECE!!!@&# You had me checking my tl every second for the updates as it gets posted!!! It's THAT good 😭🙏
blue, bluey, my lovely lovely blue, as the wise kim gyuvin once said, "do not ever beg sth that easily".
with that said, uhhh may i ask for a teeny tiny hint on what fic you're working on at the moment? 👀 (just a teeeeny tiny hint <3)
do you have any tips for writing? i try my hardest but i cant help but be envious of your writing skills
it’s so interesting you say that because i felt extremely self conscious about posting drywalled because i felt that my writing was subpar this time around LOL. i couldn’t help but compare my writing skills to the next person so i guess it’s all relative. despite the fact that i’ve been writing for nearly half of my life at this point. all of that is to say, comparison is the thief of joy. reading others’ writing can put a fire under you to improve your skills, but it can also smother your progress as a writer entirely. it’s important to have a balance, kind of like how it’s said that a good amount of stress is necessary for a productive life. i hope i’m making sense!
i’m definitely not the oracle of prose nor am i an expert, but the advice that i can give you is: write what speaks to you. that passion will show in your writing, i promise you. if you’ve ever experienced that burst of energy that has you writing hundreds or maybe even thousands of words in one sitting, you know what i’m talking about. harness that; it’s difficult sometimes, i know for myself that getting stuck and losing that streak can feel so discouraging (looks at my dozens of abandoned wips) but if the passion’s there, it’ll return to you. at the same time, don’t force it—if at any moment writing feels like pulling teeth, step away and take a break.
also, don’t be afraid to use online sources. it doesn’t make you any less of a writer. i cannot tell you how often i’m on thesaurus dot com because i’ve forgotten how else to say a certain word lol all my years of schooling fly out the window every time.
a bonus one for me is i try to avoid using epithets (i.e. the younger one, the shorter one, etc) just out of my own preference and i think it can be a good way to practice feeling more comfortable with “repetitive” language—it’s okay to address the character by name multiple times in one paragraph. it may seem constant to you as the writer, but as the reader, it actually flows pretty nicely and we don’t even notice the supposed repetition. (but feel free to use epithets if that is what you prefer. there’s nothing wrong with using them!)
drawing off of that last point, i think the best advice i can give to wrap this up is to write from the perspective of your hypothetical reader. it kind of relates back to the self indulgence point i made earlier. honing in on that passion is so important as a fanfiction writer especially. be the change you want to see. ask yourself if what you’re writing is what you yourself would read. i know we’re naturally more critical of our own writing than we are of others’, but ingraining this in your process can help undo all that self doubt you might have.
but honestly, truly, you telling me that you try your best means you’re already there. you don’t need me at all! keep on keeping on. there may be days where you think your writing is spectacular, and days where you believe the opposite. again, it’s all relative. just continue doing your best and giving your all. and remember to have fun with it! every last bit of shipping culture, including writing, should be enjoyable 🩵
I really want to try writing gmg but I get stuck when I try and make their dynamic work in fic because I don’t want to do it wrong. What would you say are the fundamental elements of their dynamic that you would want to see featured in fics
ahh thank you for asking i now have an excuse to talk about this LOL. i know the main issue with writing real people is trying not to stray too far from their actual personality/dynamics so what i will say is don’t feel much pressure to conform into one concrete way to write a specific person. this applies to outside of gmg too, just rpf in general. if you have a vision you want to see come to life and you want to use gmg to help you do that then by all means go ahead (of course, do it responsibly, that goes without saying).
but to answer your question, i do have my own preferences of what i like to see portrayed in gmg fics specifically. first and foremost, i enjoy reading geon and maet’s mutual attraction for each other more than anything else. you may find it difficult to portray this accurately through one pov but i’d suggest dropping easter eggs throughout that would lead the reader to assume that “oh, he likes him just as much as he does. maybe even more so.” another thing: maet’s consistent babying/compliment giving and geon’s watchful eye on any and everything maet does. geon loves praises and maet welcomes being looked after so i drool over that in any fic no matter how small the description <3 oh and also them equally being touchy with each other. max points if you emphasize size difference (i.e. geon’s big hands around maet’s thick thighs) love it alwayssss. i’d like to take the time to link the gmg timeline that you can always reference for canon events surrounding gmg, it may help with writing their dynamic more “accurately”!
but honestly, if you feel like you haven’t met any of the above “criteria” (even though you REALLY don’t have to i can’t stress this enough!! i’m a nobody at the end of the day) you can always tag your fic ooc lmao. but i hope this helped at all!!
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