average haobin enjoyer · 2mo
new all our rapture chapter was soo good i loved the yule ball scene so much! just curious, what was the conversation that you said you were struggling with? was it the first one or the one between hao and gideon? i really couldn’t tell, you wrote everything so so well
omg i am so happy that you couldn’t tell haha it was the conversation with gideon! it was just hard for me to get the right tone for it, like i knew what i wanted hao to feel and do but it was hard reconciling the two and then figuring out how to balance it well. i think i was just pinning too many expectations on that one scene when it’s just one in a string of many and all of them together will tell a fuller story! ANYWAY thank you so much i’m so glad you liked it all🥹🥹
