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A Foolish Goof · 8mo

You would think that the author who's writing a plot with deep demon lore and revenge would at least make a decent love triangle where both guys would have a healthy bromamce but still trying get the girl. Make it hard for me, us, to choose. Don't try make one shine more than the other by making the one they wrote so nicely in the beginning into someone who's rudely jealous. Like you said they don't need to be enemies.

But even the author forgets what they wrote. I remember you pointed out that they meet at a ball but then it was said they meet first at the carnival. It would make sense if Joseph remembered how Keira fainted when meeting Erez so him being hostile at the carnival would reason his reaction but somehow both forgot they meet before when Erez remembered Joseph after the ball event. The author writing for romance is trash if im going to be honest.

I agree wholeheartedly with this and wish to say more but honestly I'm so done with it.
I want post this via Twitter but it probably caused problems so I'll just answer and leave it up on my retro profile so it's atleast one way ppl can see if they enter.

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