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hi luma i finally went through some of your matt maltese recs and i loveeee everyone adores you (at least i do) it's SO hkvh coded... thank u for the rec!!! :)
omg... I LOVE MATT MALTESE.... and i love that song... you're welcome i love spreading matt propaganda
hello hello luminvies i was just reading your response to the ask where anon was talking about olts, tuesdays, and pomp and circumstance and you were talking about how you're inspired by other writers like richard siken and and how you read other people's fic and was inspired and I wanted you to know that you are 100% that person for me. Every time i read your fic it's jawdropping like you write the most beautiful fics i've ever read and i tell all my friends about how much i love your fic, it just feels so alive and full of light and humanity and it's like seeing the world in a whole new way. I think that reading your fic has really helped me grow as a writer and your fics make me feel more emotions than i ever knew i could
omg pls this is so sweet...... ahhhhh........ being thought of as an inspiration is just sokdf lsjdfklsjdf thank you so much....
Tell Sprout she’s awesomesauce
i would love to but i am not a liar :( i can relay your message tho!
hi!!!! okay first of all you are such a great writer . i love all your fics to the death omg i think at this point i've been so addicted that i binged all your hkthm fics in like 3 days!!!!!!! thats how good you are !! i especially love love tuesdays, pomp and circumstance, and one lifetime too short!!! your writing in it is just . so good like Damn i love how clinical ur alhaitham is written and how steadfast he is in his love for kaveh i love them so muchhh ough and your characterisation!!!! And language!!!!!!! Its all so good and your fanfics could genuinely be published novels purely based on quality of writing and word count like ur fics are so hefty and they don’t feel long because of how they’re written!!! you capture so many things so brilliantly in ur fics, esp the dreamlike feeling of high school(?) and graduation and drifting apart .. also the bit about alhaitham’s grandma in one lifetime too short rlly hit me in the feels :sob: :sob: okayyy now that im done yapping about how much i adore ur fics, i have a few questions!!
what is ur writing process, if no one has asked you that yet?? and also like how do you write such pretty imagery and like idk write in general,,,,,,,
any good writers u recommend/fave fanfics? :3
how do you get inspo for your fics?
yeahh i hope this wasnt that big of a yapfest, youve rlly inspired me to keep writing and improve my prose hahah . have a good one!!
WAHHH THANK U SO MUCH.... eee... my writing process typically begins with an idea floating in my head; i'll take tuesdays as an example!! with that fic i knew i wanted to write an ambiguous exes vibe, and typically i also know what kind of atmosphere i want to create - like if i want to be more prosey and flowery or if i want to take a laidback, conversational tone for my crack fics with more simplistic language. my goal with tuesdays was a sort of dry but still figurative approach that leaned on metaphors, so i knew going in that i wanted 1) exes to lovers, 2) a certain writing tone to replicate, and 3) to kind of fuck with the formatting a bit, like the list and the one; two; three; four sequence. then i just jump into the first scene! i know that quite a few (aka all) of my writing friends jump around, but i can't write unless im going chronologically. my goal with the first scene is always to set up the premise of the fic (It’s a Tuesday when Kaveh breaks up with Al-Haitham.) and then i sort of derail from there! most of my fics follow a chronological timeline like p&c but tuesdays skipped around a bunch to sort of build up this atmosphere around the fic while still following this overarching sequence of kaveh breaks up w hthm -> goes to grocery store -> goes to thai place -> ends up at tighnaris -> gets sense knocked into him and then he returns to hthm, where they then reconcile. i didnt have the reason why they broke up revealed until the latter half, so before that the scenes that existed outside of the straightforward timeline were there to build up the love and apprehension in equal parts that led to kaveh's self sabotage. but to be honest i didnt think of it in that extensive detail; i can just see how it comes together after the fact LKFMKSDFJ but i knew that i wanted sort of pieced together scenes that didnt flow to an exact chronological order! tbh my writing process is very much fuck it we ball so after the initial scene of setting up the rest of the fic i just go with the flow and with wherever the doc wants to take me. for me at least, if i outline too extensively then i KNOW ill derail from the plan and end up somewhere outside of the outline which is why i don't do it LMAO my philosophy is always that if a fic wants to end, then ill let it end even if i planned other things to add to it later. ALSO while im writing i usually think of details or scenes that i want to add later so i have a priv discord server where i make separate channels for each fic to keep track of the specific details, just so i know what to reference later on! it's a very informal process lol
u also mentioned p&c and olts, which r actually very significant anomalies to my typical writing process LMDKSFL so i figured id touch on it bc those two + the angel kaveh fic were the only three hkvh fics that i extensively outlined (i did not even outline olts, ink came up with an extremely detailed plot after we came up with the premise and i added around 15~ out of 150+ scenes during creation). but for those fics, i had bullet pointed outlines that included both detailed scenes and vague "this needs to happen at this point" to keep track of where i was and the end goal. i'll include screenshots of both my p&c outline n an example of an informal discord planning channel on the tweet if it helps!
ok now that that's over with. FOR IMAGERY AND WRITING IN GEN i am very much inspired by other people... i think about richard siken's poetry a Lot which is a huge thing for me. i also developed imagery and metaphors that i always lean on just by writing a lot of fic + poetry on my own, so i know that i prefer things that have to do with water, earthquakes, rib cages and chests, birds, fire and matches, and most of all KNIVES AND BLADES AND HOOKS,,, i really dont think theres any other way of figuring out ur own personal style unless u practice it a bunch on ur own! it took me forever to figure out LMAO i read my writing from 2022 and i hate it ngl. writing is a learned skill and it takes time but also the process of figuring it out can be something so beautiful... theres nothing to do but to start! i started when i was like. six or seven technically. but i only started thinking of writing novels at ten (which ive since mostly given up on), and then fic at late fifteen!! writing fic definitely made me a way better writer and is why i can sort of write things like poetry and attempt to dabble in original fic these days without cringing at it
omg ok im sorry for talking so much but i was pretty unaware and unconscious of my writing until june . like. 2.5 months ago. like ofc i knew what i was writing and that i had different styles i switched between but in june i read way home by yamabato (https://archiveofourown.org/works/41831829) and it really had a HUGE impact on me bc i was like holy shit... how r people just casually writing like that... i need to get better. n to be very honest i had a crisis and multiple breakdowns abt how much i hated my writing LMAO TO BE FULLY TRANSPARENT... i really really really despised my writing and felt that it was so incredibly unimpressive and plain and mediocre and um long story short i began paying a hell of a lot more attention to my prose and how i worded things and attempted a new writing style entirely when i wrote fugu! something i think helped me improve my writing was to take a piece that i really admired (for me it was the fic that reoriented my life) and then replicate the details that i really admired; for me it was the immersive details and the really beautiful way they described the settings, emotions, and people. so basically i forced myself to adapt my writing into something i could be proud of and writing fugu was a really slow process but it allowed me to be able to write again! OKAY ANYWAY im not sure which of ur questions that answered but it felt relevant to the whole how i write spiel
in terms of writers/fics i recommend i compiled a list of the ones that give me the most inspiration in the latter half of this ask retrospring.net/@luminvies/a/113036706381550933 and all of my fav fics r bookmarked on my profile!
inspo for my fics... honestly i dont even know they pop into my head half formed and then i attempt to put it to the doc... sometimes ill take tropes like superhero, office au, identity porn, fwb, and then i just go from there but its mostly just intuitive. i belieeeve i have a diff ask where i tweeted a couple of screenshots of my fic prompt list to give an idea of how my ideas come to be? shld be somewhere in my media lMSFLKJ
ok im done now im the one whos the yapper here obviously LMAO but thank u again for such a sweet ask and so many compliments aughhh...... im literally so honored to be an inspiration that means so much to me since a huge part of my writing is to make other people feel the way that i do when i read really good writing T^T thank you again.. have a nice day i hope the length of this didnt kill you.....
Hi hi hi I was wondering what you're planning on studying? Or what you plan on going into in the future?
im an english major!! planning on applying to some minors that r more specifically catered to writing but we will see what happens lol. i currently want to go into publications... so not the actual writing of novels themselves but the production bc i think itd be sooooo cool to be a part of the creation process in sharing stories w the world... tho who knows what will happen bc there r many sectors in publishing n i may change my mind later on lol this is just my current goal!!
Well this isn’t a question, I just wanted to thank you ? And just say I love your writings , I think I read all of them and I wear it like a badge of honor , keep writing and I will keep reading , I know you’ll be going places because you’re just that talented
AHHH! omg this is so sweet thank you so much T^T i will always keep writing!! kudos to you for reading sm fics omg....
"to whom it may piss off" is amazing holy shit i love you please write forever and don't quit , you've truly impacted my genshin
hi omg thank u i had such a great time writing that one... i also hope i write forever... i cld never give up on hkvh ill be back (threat) even if i am incredibly hq oriented rn
hey!! writing question: how do u write smth u haven't experienced before?? ur 18 and u wrote abt having an office job however i assume u haven't actually had one before so how were u able to characterize that? im a fellow teenager who struggles w writing things i haven't done so i wanted to ask how u do it :3 ur such an amazing author and like yeah ur just super amazing so i'd love some tips!!
hiii i love writing questions c: soooo honestly i kept things really vague in, per ur example, the office au! didn't write much in detail about their jobs, briefly skirted around anything that had to do with actual tasks they would deal with to give the impression of the office while it remained as the setting. bc idrk! on that fic in particular i asked a few of my older friends abt what kind of company theyd work at n they gave me ideas! so its not as if im magically coming up w anything myself lol i also tend to research things while im writing fics in areas im unfamiliar w! just some things like that. i feel like to some extent theres absolutely no way of writing around a lack of life experience.... i would assume its much more obvious to others that im kind of clueless! i think ive managed to get away with it by being purposefully vague in some aspects and then providing specific details when i know for sure what im talking about LMAO
for another example im taking the food review hkvh fic i wrote - tbh i just like food n cooking so i wld reference sites like the infatuation for example. they have an instagram n id watch their posts which kind of gives me insider knowledge on how a business like that is run. and then i just logic out everything that i still dont know! i hope this was helpful... i cld prob think of others if theres anything else u can think of!
are u on the haikaveh disc server wink wink nudge nudge
helloooo no i am not i get freaked out by big discord servers 😔 i hide w my friends in dms n priv servers lol
the day (today) I found out u and sprout were friends my life changed. wtf. I adore both y'all's works THHIS IS CRAZY
AHHH THIS IS SO SWEET LOL hehe its very nice to hear u like our fics 🥹 we r very good friends (but dont tell her pls)
HEY hope you’ve been doing well ! super random question (if it’s one that i may ask) what does the white and red symbol(?) in your bio stand for? :)
HELLO its a mahjong tile bc im chinese!! oomf asked me if i was white once and i was like i have to clear this up,,, the character on the tile is zhōng n china is zhōng guó :] i cld not fit two flags in my location (china n us....) so mahjong it is!
HI LUMA please share the strawberry matcha cookies recipe…!! 🙏
HI i sort of improvised it but heres the base i used https://www.brownedbutterblondie.com/soft-and-chewy-sugar-cookies/
i left out abt 35g of the flour, added about 2 tbsp of matcha to half the dough and about 15g of crushed freeze dried strawberries to the other, marbled the dough, n the icing is more crushed strawb, powdered sugar, n a bit of water!!
i sent "if the world is ending, it's being very quiet about it" to my friend because it's my favorite and she sent me this song https://soundcloud.com/maybe0000tomorrow/theendoftheworldcover?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=0&si=472116B67183491FAF68CEA875531F8B&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing because it reminded her of it and i cried so hard actually i wanted to share
omg this is so sweet... thank you for sharing eeee.... this song is so beautiful thank u for sending it my way hehe
DROP ANOTHER FIC LIKE FUGU AND MY LIFE IS YOURsSSS.
FUGU!!! i miss her... i wld love to but i dont have any ideas that replicate the vibe 😔 BUT ONE DAY!! it was rly satisfying weaving those themes into one fic and ill 100% do it again
how does it feel to have 420 followers
for a solid day it was rly great 10/10 experience
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