little rat boy · 4mo
I think my one favourite thing about your writing is how you write physically yearning for someone. Yknow. Like the sexual tension you write is INSANE I don’t know how you do it. It’s palpable, I can TASTE it. Amazing shit
omg.... tysm... !!! my mental cheat sheet for writing tension is that it's not just a description, it's a game of buildup. tension has a source and THEN a feeling. wheres the blush without the subtle touch along their jaw? the stuttering intake of air without the teasing words that put a vice around their lungs to begin with? tension is so fun to write. it's tit for tat, each piece introduced slowly until the tension is everywhere, unignorable. bound to explode.
im still personally working on describing internal feeling over physical descriptions, constant work in progress!!! i'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far ❤️❤️
