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mga anak ni jollibee · 3d
Take your time, Authornim. May isang reader kang willing maghintay. 🙋♀️
mga anak ni jollibee · 3d
Hey, I am currently reading B & S au and I’m now on panel 098 and woah the emotions I’m feeling are intense lol. I am so mad and pissed off by Ocean because her keeping the kids from Terence is really upsetting and also her reasoning behind it is weak/ doesn’t make any sense…and then she decides to give Terence the box and then leaves him hanging which is messed up !!!omg 😭😭😂 I’m mad at myself for getting this frustrated over an au lol. Ocean is really messed up for doing all that to Terence. My heart also goes out to Brie like just imagine how she feels/felt whew!!!
I really am trying to see things from Oceans side but so far she just seems selfish but I could be wrong….
Anyways I’m enjoying the book and thank you so much for sharing it with us!!!
First of all, thank you for taking the time to message me! Seeing new readers always makes me so happy hehe. Considering there are now over 200 panels, all I can say is—it’s only going to get more interesting from here! 👀
Honestly, I stared at your message for so long, trying to figure out how to answer it properly because, trust me, even I struggled with how to ‘fix’ Ocean’s choices while writing this story 😆. She actually planned to tell Terence about the twins on their 3rd birthday. That’s why she told her cousin (who's dating one of Terence’s friends) to have her boyfriend invite his friends, too. If you remember the early panels, she did try… but her cowardice got the best of her. I know, I know, it looks so messed up 😭.
You’re not wrong for feeling frustrated, but Ocean’s emotions were all over the place, and she made choices she thought were best at the time (even if they weren’t). Plus, she had no idea he was with Brie since they had lost contact. She didn’t want to ruin anything—seeing someone you once loved seemingly happy with another person… I think a lot of people would hesitate too. I know I probably would. And well… Irvin slipped up… and the rest is history...
Anyway, thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! I love reading reactions like this—it makes writing this story even more fun!
mga anak ni jollibee · 9d
Hi, more clues po sa pw. All caps po ba? Or small letters?
mga anak ni jollibee · 9d
tried wave but it's incorrect
mga anak ni jollibee · 9d
Small letters no space yung sa privatter author?
mga anak ni jollibee · 9d
can you give more clue po sa pw? 😔 I tried wav— but it's mali
mga anak ni jollibee · 12d
I'm curious how you'll handle the plot. I saw the movie last year and despite that ending, I liked the movie, of course there are things that I disliked about the characters (especially ml), but speaking of the plot it is interesting. Reading this version, is a complicated experience, due to that ending but your writting is beautiful and now i can't stop. I'm so excited to see what's next and how much I'm going to suffer.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your insights! I really love it when readers express their thoughts through essay HAHA! Anyways~ I totally get what you mean about the movie. The plot twist and how the characters were portrayed. The characters and their choices were definitely frustrating. I even watch the movie when I'm annoyed at something just to release that emotion, it helped a lot lol.
I'm really happy that you liked this version (and sorry in advance) that my version is also making you feel all sorts of emotions. I hope you'll stick around to see how it all unfolds! 😗
mga anak ni jollibee · 13d
So far the story is very interesting and real/relatable and I like it, thanks for sharing it. Now I hate how Lex blames herself for most of the things and I hate hate hate(for now lol) Simon because what the hell is he doing??? Your girlfriend just had an abortion and you leave her(yeah I get she said it was okay but a real man/boyfriend would’ve stayed). Also it could be because most of the narrations are from Lex’s pov so maybe that’s why it’s easier to sympathise with her idk. But overall I would like to see Simons pov and also how things are as of now and more and more of the story. Again, thanks for sharing the book with us
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts, anon! I really appreciate it.
I totally get why Simon’s actions are frustrating, especially since we’re seeing everything through Lexie’s eyes. The way she processes things makes it easier to sympathize with her, right? That’s kind of intentional since situations like this happen in real life too. As for Simon… uh, well, we’ll see. Maybe in an upcoming chapter, we’ll get a better sense of how he really reacted to everything.
As I write, I try to put myself in their shoes, even though I already know how the story should unfold. I find myself reimagining different possibilities—what if things had played out completely differently, like in a movie or novel? I also mentioned that I’d be altering some scenes to better fit the title and plot I have in mind. Whether there’s a redemption arc or not, we’ll see how the story unfolds.
Thanks again for engaging with the story—I really appreciate it!
mga anak ni jollibee · 15d
so heavy :<
mga anak ni jollibee · 16d
Nothing major to ask… maybe, update soon? Lol. Reminds me of the song “Brick” by Ben Folds Five. Keep ‘em coming. Love your fics ☺️
mga anak ni jollibee · 16d
Shutaaa di ko ma like author grabe to sobra nabwibwiset ako kay Simon 😤
mga anak ni jollibee · 17d
It kinda reminds me also of manhwa I’m reading rn, and it didn’t end well coz the guy cheated :> oks lang angst enjoyer po ako hahaha can’t wait sa next ud. Nahook na agad ako, moooooooore hahaha
mga anak ni jollibee · 2mo
napag utusan lang ho aq. pano daw nabuo ung kambal maem?
mga anak ni jollibee · 2mo
Pano ho naging dalawa ung mga anak nila?
mga anak ni jollibee · 2mo
Was wondering if may chinange po kayo sa last narration nung 213? Kasi may disclaimer po kayo prior to posting na hope the readers won’t get mad at you for the narration. I was thinking, “oh no, may mangyayari sigurong bad.” After reading it, wala naman po kagalit-galit. Thanks for the updates! Hehe
Hello po, good morning! Meron po tweaks left and right lang po pero hindi po talaga nabago yung flow ng narration. Iniba ko yung pagkakasulat ng mga limang beses bago ko naisip na satisfied na ako sa narration. 😂 Iniisip ko po kasi kung anong magiging reaksyon niyong lahat kung ganon ang mangyayari. hehe. I was wondering if you all felt like it was rushed or something... 👉🏻👈🏻 Thank you for reading po! mwa